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Rex crying is eyes out as he watched the time machine took off wit out him and Ace. left behind by his friends and wit his dinoholder busted ( the new dinoholder don't have the stones in them )how is he going to survive in Naruto's time ?

Rex on his hands and knees crying  uu...I..can't..believe....they..left..me 

?  don't cry young one  said a sweet and com female voice

Rex turned his head to look at her and wus shocked to a 6 feet tall women that look to be in her 20 wit red hair,fox ears,and 9 fox tails wear a red kimono

? don't be scared young one I'm here to help, now tell me your name 

Rex standing up looking at faceing her  you tell me your name first 

? fine my name is yuki kitsune ( she is my oc ) 

Rex '' Kitsune ? ''

? = Yuki '' it means fox demon but don't be scared I'm not going to hurt you now your name ? ''

Rex  Rex Owen 

Yuki well Rex I seen all of the fight ( the fight befor the story begain if you can't tell ) so i know you got left behind by your friends and those nasty aliens kill your mom and dad so I'm going to help you 

Rex  And how are you going to help me 

yuki  I can adopt you but it wood mean you'll become a half demon and it wood made us blood relatives but you well be human again on a new moon + you'll be more powerful then your dinosaur friends champ but be warning side affects you'll lose same of your humanity and have to follow all of our kind's customs, rule and be overpower by your urges and instincts and if you don't learn to control the older you get the more powerful those feeling will get so do you wont my help or not 

Rex stop crying  Yes i wont your help mother 

Yuki Good now stand still son  she started makeing hand sign  Demon Transformashin jutsu  red chakra started comeing out of Rex's body swirling around it and after about five minutes it stop  You are now a half demon and officially my son 

Rex shocked as looked at his hands the nails where longer and pointed makeing his hands resemble claws  thank you mother but I wish I could see wut I look like now 

Yuki  theirs a river over ther son 

rex walked over to the river and looked shocked at wuthe eyes like blood red fox's eyes ,he face has 3 whites on both sides of his face,two brown fox ears replace his human ones, a brown fox tail swaying right to left behind him, he had fang, and he had on new clothes, blue pants, a black long sleave shirt , the same shoes as Naruto but black, the same hair style as naruto too and moremuscle he's not buff but still he if he took his shirt all the lades around him wood pass out

I can't believe this is me 

Ace jumped and bite Rex's tail Rex screamed in pain and champ let go of his tail

Ace don't bite my tail again  he grad his tail look at it to see champ's bite mark glowed red thin healed  Mother why do I only have 1 tail and you have 9 

Yuki  You see son tails are a symbol of power the more tails you have the stronger you are and you have 1 tail because you are a new demon as you get older you'll get more talis and hit evey new tail you become 100% more powerful 

rex smiled

Yuki  now it time to go 

rex '' go where ? ''

rex puzzled  hidden demon ninja village ?

Yuki  Yes and as the name implies evey one in the village is a demon or half now we don't wont to be late son  and the to kitsune walked off to the village

( bio for the hidden demon village The village wus founded by a demon more powerful thin the 9 tailed fox as a base for his demons but demon wus killed none knows who the demon is or who killed him but the demons remant and so thit the village as a home for all demons and half demons alike END BIO)

As soon as the two got to the gate a red light flashed ( the red light is a scaner,it scanersto tell if you are a demon or half demon and if you aren't you don't git in wit out a demon's invite ) the gates open and as the to walked in rex looked around ( it look like the hidden leaf village but the village's symbol is a pair of bat wings ) And as he did he sow two girl half fox demon the two girl blushed as thay look back he. rex blushed a littel to.

Yuki stop at a big building at the senter of the village ( it look like the leaf village hokage tower ) We are were son 

rex look at the tall tower puzzled again

Two demon ninja one look like a dog demon the other one a cat demon

cat demon  lady demonkage ( the leader of the village ) who is that boy behind you 

Yuki  He is my new adopted son 

Both demon  sorry lady demonkage 

rex  Mother why do thay keep calling you that 

Yuki  simply son the demonkage is the leader of the village 

rex shocked to here his new mom is the leader of his new home the hidden demon village

Yuki  you to show my son to his new room 

The demon  Yes lady demonkage 

rex arived at the door to his new room and as soon as he steped in he herd his new mother voice

Yuki  Now son you are going to need you rest tomorrow you well start at the demon village ninja school 

rex  yes mother  he lade down on his new bed thinking of all that had happen today He last his mom and dad,His friends left him for dead,He got a new mother,he became a half fox demon,he liveing in a ninja village were eveyone is a demon or half demon, learned his new mom is the leader of it, and his starting ninja school tomorrow morning.

ace quilled like a pig and tell max pited he up and pook him on the bed

rex  well rex owen is dead and I'm his replacement rex kitsune  and wint to sleep

to be continued

wit the D team all of them are smiling accept for Zoe

Zoe crying her eyes out  we shodn't have left him 

Dr.z  Will you shut up we going backing in time to save him  the time machine lands ( 2 years late )

all steps out to see the spectal space pirates and soon all of the dinosaurs are out and fighting ( I'm not going to right a dinoasur fight in this chapter) but a red chakar blast wipedout all the dinosaurs. all turned to see a demon that look like naruto's 4 tails kyuubi from but it's not naruto it's rex in his demon from

all of them scared and some pp in ther pants  WUT IS THAT THING 

It ( aka rex ) let out a tarraing scream and ran off leaving all of them scared out of ther minds

( I'm going to put s.s.p for spectal space pirates for now on ) s.s.p to ther ships and the D-team ran back in the time machine all accept Zoe ( thay landed on a cliff ) the cliff she wusstanding on clasped and as she wus felling some one wit 4 fox tails caught andsaved her and the next thing Zoe know she wake up in a room laying on a bed she never seen be-for

Zoe  ware am I 

? in a deep sexy voice  in my room zoe 

Zoe  who said that 

?  I did  as he step up as Zoe could seem him ( the only thing different about rex now is he has 4 tails now )

Zoe terrified beyond all belief

rex = ?  relaxes Zoe I'm not going to hurt you 

Zoe scared  how do you know my name 

Max did not answer because ace ran up to him

Zoe  weight how did you git ace

rex tossed her his broken dino holder

Zoe crying  rex is that you but wut happened to you 

rex  the short answer is I'm now half demon 

Zoe cry  but how we only left a couple of sec 

rex  it may have been sec. for you but for me it wus 2 years 

Zoe crying more then she had ever in her life  I told them not to leave you 

rex  Stop crying Zoe do you think I'd save you git to hurt you even I'm part demon now and I did wipeout all of the dinosaurs 

Zoe look at him still crying  that monster wus you 

Max  Yes in my demon from it one of the benefits of being a 4 tailed kitsune 

Zoe crying and puzzled  kitsune 

Max  it means fox demon  and in a sec. he wus on top of her

Zoe blushing as she looked him over OMG HIS HOT well he wus always cute but now even it 4 tails and fox ears he's still the most sexiest thing I ever seen

Max now Zoe do you wont me to answer all of your questions 

Zoe hiding her blush  Yes  and wit at he told her everything, his new mother, new friends,Raln-sensei, his first mission on which he kill a enemy ninja and tanks to a mob of sex crazed female kitsune in mateing season him not being a virgin any more that shocked her the most

Zoe still crying as she looking in to Max's now blood red eyes  you kill some one 

Max looking in to her eyes  he tried to kill me first  as he started to cry himself

( flashback )

Max ( wit 2 tails ) watching a ninja of the hidden rain village attacked him and his new friends and wus wining

Max it seemed so simple spy on the enemy camp outside the village 

The rain ninja jumped and Max sow his chance and one the rain ninja land Max wus behind him ( if you passout one you see blood don't read ) riped the rain ninja's heart out 

Max fell to his kness cry because he killed some one 

( end flash back )

Zoe  I'm sorry buried her head into his chest crying her eye out

Max raping his arms and all 4 of his tails around her  you have nothing to be sorry about Zoe

Zoe  but  he cut her

Max takeing her chin in to his hand forceing her to look him in the eye  but nothing Zoe Now stop crying I can't stan to see the woman I love cry  holding her tight

Zoe shocked  You love me 

Max  I've loved you ever sens i first saw you  and thin he kissed her lips the kiss wus short but loveing

Zoe  I love you too Max  as buried her head back in his chest hiding the blush on her face and still crying

Max  it's ok Zoe  holding her close conferring her tell she fell asleep in his arms

Max looking at the girl asleep in his arms thus this means she's my girlfriend now

and soon he to fell asleep holding Zoe tightly in his arms

to be continued

Zoe  good morning Max 

Max raping all of his tails around her as he pulled her closer  Good morning Zoe did her sleep well 

Zoe resting her head on his chest  Yes and how long have you been up 

Max  a couple of hours

Zoe looking in to his red eyes  so you been holding me in my sleep for hours 

Max looking in to her eyes  and what's so wrong about that 

Zoe resting her head on his chest smiling  nothing 

But unknown to the couple Yuki ( Max's new mom ) wus watching them

Yuki walking in to Max's room  will isn't this a beautiful moment 

Max and Zoe ( and ther both blushing blood red ) jumped up in shock

Max  Mother ever hear of knocking 

Yuki  now now son why don't you show your girlfriend around the village 

Zoe blushing more won Max's new mom called her his girlfriend  I would like that Max 

Max  So I guess means we're a couple now

Zoe  I guess so 

Max toke her chin in to his hand,leaned down and the lips mint in a loveing kiss

Yuki smiling as she walked out of the room I'll be a grandmother in no time

Zoe broke the kiss  so are you going to show me around 

Max  It'll be my pleasher  picking her up

Zoe blushing more now and she raped her arms around his neck  Max what are you doing 

Max walking to the window  relax Zoe I've do this everyday  as he jump out the window wit Zoe in his arms

Zoe  aaaaaaa( thay land ) aaa

Max  Zoe we've land already 

Zoe looking up to see the tower

Max puting her on the grand  By the way the window we jump out of wus on the 10th floor 

Zoe  WHAT THE TENTH FLOOR AND YOU GIT JUMP OUT OF IT 

Max  relax Zoe do every sens I first became a half demon

Zoe  WHAT 

Max  it faster then the stairs 

Zoe not know how to reply to that so are you going to show me around 

Max takeing hold of her hand  shore 

as Max gave her a tour of the village thay ran into Silver and Kitty

?  ha Max 

Max and Zoe stop walking and turn around

Max  hi Silver 

? = Sliver  ha Max who's the hot chick 

Zoe step behind Max

Max mad  She's my girlfriend Silver 

Silver scared  sorry man 

Zoe get form behind Max  It's ok, I Zoe Drake and you are 

Silver  I'm Silver houkou 

Zoe puzzled  houkou 

Silver  it means wolf demon 

and the next sec. some jump on to Max and get on top of him

?  hello Foxy 

Max pushing her off of him and piting up  First I have a girlfriend Kitty and sec One you call me foxy are is it a joke or not 

Zoe giting in kitty's face  Git your own boyfriend you skank 

Kitty  I'm sorry I didn't know ,please forgive me

Zoe Ok but if I see you jump on MY BOYFRIEND again I don't care if you are a half demon I'll kick your ass 

Kitty  ok i can live wit that' by the way my name Kitty Nekomata 

Zoe puzzled again  Nekomata 

Kitty  It means cat demon 

Zoe grabing Max's hand  I don't care, you gist stay away from MY MAN 

Max raping all 4 of his tails around her  It's ok Zoe you know I only love you  pulling her in to a kiss it wus short but loveing

Max  well we got to go guys I wus giveing Zoe a tour of the village  bith walked off hand and hand

Kitty and Silver  goodbye see you tomorrow Max 

And once the tour wus over the were back in Max's room he throw Zoe on the his bed and got on top of her

Zoe blushing  uuuu Max what are you doing 

Max moveing his head to her neck  relax Zoe I'm not going to hurt you  as he started kissing her neck giveing her a hickey

Zoe biting her hand to stop herself from moaning ooooooo IT FEELS SO GOOD

Max stop kissing her neck and removed his shirt

Zoe blushing more now  Max what are you doing  O MY GOD O MY GOD O MY GOD

Max smiling  Zoe everything is going to be git fine  as he removed her little blazer and her t-shirt reviling her blue bra ( max starts blushing )

Zoe covering herself  Max what the hell are you doing 

Max  Zoe I love and I though I would never see you again so I want every sec wit you to matter  as he removed her pants reviling her blue panties

Zoe smiling and blushing a deep blood red '' Max I love you too but... '' Max cut her off by kissing her and removed her bra

Max broke the kiss and licking and sucking her breasts

Zoe blushing deeper OOOOooo it feels so good as she moan in pleasher

Max stop sucking and licking her breasts and removed her panties

Max Zoe if you want me to stop I will 

Zoe blushing  No don't stop

Max  good  as spread her legs and began lick Zoe's pussy

Zoe loveing every moment of it  ooooooooooo Max I'm cuming  and she did

Max licking her cum up  my o my Zoe her juices taste so good 

Zoe blushing 20 different reds as Max kissed again and as Max wus kissing her she remove his pants and boxers reviling 12 inches long penis

Zoe  O MY GOD IT'S SO BIG 

Max  Zoe We both know a girl first time hurt the most so relax 

Zoe  ok  as he thrusted his penis in to her pussy

Zoe seeking conferred in a embrace  ooooooo...it's..worm 

Max returning the embrace  It's ok Zoe the pain will go away soon  as he pulled her so close her breasts where squished flat agents his chest

Zoe '' ooooo..Max...I .. LOVE ...you ''

Max  I love you too Zoe 

Zoe bring her head in his chest and crying

Max  Zoe tell me who does it feel 

Zoe '' It'...It's.... so..llll..long......and...slippery and....so..worm...It...hurts ''

Max gave her a deep and loveing kiss makeing her pain turn in to pleasher

Max broke the kiss  Feel beater Zoe 

Zoe  yes 

Max  Zoe I'm going to start thrusting  as he fliped he lade her on her stomach

Max  are you ready Zoe 

Zoe  yes 

Max started thrusting his penis in and out of her pussy  you'er nice and wet  between thrusts

Zoe buring her head in the bedsheets oooooooo IT FEELS SO GOOD Max I'm co close  as she started sliding back and forth,she slid down as he thrusted up

Zoe  MAX  she screamed as the surf in her pussy crashed into his penis

Max  Zoe I'm going cum 

Zoe  Me too  as both of them cum

they collapsed as ther love-makeing gushed out of Zoe's pussy

Zoe held herself agaiinst her lover,She could feel his penis soften, and enjoyed the moment like a sunset.

Max pulled his penis out of her and lade down next to her  I love you Zoe  pulling her in to a loveing embrace and raping all 4 of his tails around her

Zoe  I love you too Max 

Max kiss her one last time and both fell asleep in each others arms

to be continued

the next day Max awoke to fine Zoe sleeping on his chest

Max wishing that this moment would last forever but he know it couldn't, He had to meet Raln Silver and kitty today. so he gently lade Zoe on the bed got up and dress and gist as he wus about to leave Zoe woke up

Zoe half asleep  Max where are you going 

Max turning around to look at her  to meet Raln-sensei Silver and sady Kitty we have a mission today but don't weary Zoe you gist rest 

Zoe  ok but you be careful 

Max walked over to her  I will Zoe  he then kissed her on the forehead and walk over to the window and jump out

Zoe smiled will nonce going to believe I'm in love wit a half fox demon but I don't care as she fall back asleep

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he arrived git as Kitty ( who has 2 tails now ) and Silver ( who has 4 tails like Max ) and Raln waring his anbu armor ( it look like the leaf anbu arm but blood red and black) Raln turned his head to his team ( and his waring a mask that look like tobi's but wit to eye holes and he ever take his mask off)

Raln  are mission is to kill the bear demon that has been kill human in the frost outside the village do you all understand 

Max,Silver ,and kitty  Yes Raln-sensei 

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Rex  we have to find Zoe 

Dr.Z  we now but... ( he walk in to a tree )

Ursula being a lazy ass she is  why do we have too find her ,I like it beater wit out her 

Zander  AAHHHHH MONSTER  scared out of his mind by the bear demon a bout to eta him

everyone 'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH ( they left ther dinosaur on the time machine )

the bear demon  Foolish humans all who inter thes woods die 

Everyone  IT TALKS 

the bear demon  all demon talk humans  as he attacked but a boy wit 4 tails fox ears and the same hair style as naruto jump infrownt of them stop the attack wit his bear hands ( i hope you got the joke ) and throw the bear demon back

The bear demon  stupid half demon you are no baeter then humans  as he ran at him

Max (they slitt up to find the bear demon faster ) jump out of the way and land behind the bear demon  fire style fire sword justu  a sword made of fire appeared in his right hand,he jump and cut the bear demon's head off. the fire sword disappeared ( Max has a backpack on ) and champ jump out of his backpack

Everyone ( but Max )  MAX IS THAT YOU WHAT THE HELL HAPPEN TO YOU 

Max turning around to look at them  the short answer is I'm now half demon 

everyone ( but Max )  BUT WE ONLY LEFT FOR A COUPLE OF SEC 

Max  Sec for you 2 years for me 

Raln,Silver,and Kitty appeared

Raln  Max who are this humans 

Max  Ther the Rex and alpha gang sensei 

Raln grabed Rex by the shirt  Those who leave there friends are worse then scum  he troped him

and the next thing the all know ther were handcuffed by Raln

Everyone who is not a demon or half demon  WHAT GOING ON 

Raln  relax it's gist and tell we git back to the hidden dempn village 

as soon as they got to the village and make ther way the the demonkage tower

someone ran up to Max raped her arms around his neck and kissed him

Max broke the kiss  Zoe do you mind Rex and the alpha gang are here 

Zoe  What the old lady saw us kiss ( we know that wus comeing )

Ursula  I'M NOT OLD  ( and yes ther still handcuffed )

Rex  What's going on here, I demand answers 

Raln  You'll git your answers once we're in the demonkage office 

Everyone who's not a demon or half demon puzzled  demonkage 

Max  The Village leader  he picked up Zoe  See you at the top  and jump from the street on to a building to building and finally jump in to His new mother office window

Everyone who's not a demon  

Raln cut his right arm wit kunine knife and use the blood to do summoning just  summoning jutsu  an a giant Shuksu appeared and grabed Rex and the alpha gang and did the same thing Max did

the Shuksu droped Them on the demonkage's office on floor the Shuksu disappeared ( it the sane as the hokage's office ) as Silver,Kitty,and Raln arrived

Rex  allright now give me my answers 

Yuki walking in  Give me Give me never gits 

Everyone turned

Raln,Kitty,and Silver  Lady demonkage 

Max  mother 

Rex,Zander,Dr.Z,and Ed  That's a Demon  ( Yuki is a sexy demon )

Yuki siting down a her desk  Now son give me his answers 

Max  yes mother  and he told them every thing that has happen ( even his fun wit Zoe last night )

DR.Z You kill some one 

Ed  you got caught by mod sex crazed girls 

Zander  you a ninja 

Ursula  Your that monster that wiped out the dinosaurs 

Rex  YOU SLEEPED WIT ZOE 

Zoe blushing from embarrassment  Max did you have to be so explicit  ( told them what exactly happen last night ;-) if you now what i mean )

Max walked to her takeing her in his hand  yes 

Zoe blushed more

Rex  Kill me now 

Max turning to face him  becareful what you ask for Rex 

Rex  You may be half demon, a ninja, Zoe , and you kill someone , but you're still Max Taylor 

Max  That ware you're wong my name isn't Taylor anymore it's Kitsune, and it means fox demon so don't ask 

Rex  So if I wusn't handcuffed I'd kick your ass 

Max  like to see you try  he remove Rex's handcuffs

Rex throw punch but missed and the next sec Rex wus on the ground wit Max's foot on his chest

Max  You think you're the one wit problem your mom and dad are still a live my are death but I wus lucky to find a new mother who love me as much as my old one Yuki smiled  You're still human I'm not but I found Love ' Zoe blushed deeper  And do you know all I've been throw every human I've meet wants to kill me gist for liveing  The alpha gang hide ther head in shame  You use to be my friends but ever cents you learned about your real mom and dad all you care about is yourself and tell you learn to care about others I don't know you and Don't said the word D-team again because the D-team die one you left me behind  Max took his foot off of Rex and walking away and everyone started clapped

Rex crying  Max I'm sorry 

Max  Sorry thusn't cut it 

Zoe ran over to Max an embraced him

Max return the embrace

Raln  Now thats over wit,wut are we going to do wit Rex and the alpha gang lady demonkgae

Yuki  The alpha gang are are gust os show them to gust rooms but Rex will go to jail 

Rex  sound fair 

Max  but cents he feels bad for wut he did it will only be 10 days 

Yuki smiling  You're correct son now take Rex to jail and show the alpha gang to ther rooms 

Later that night in Max's room

Max throw Zoe on the bed and got on top of her

Zoe Blushing blood red  Max control your self the old lady next door

Ursula next door  I'M NOT AN OLD LADY 

Max pulled Zoe in to a loveing kiss

Max broke the kiss  Your right Zoe 

Max lade down next to Zoe and pulled her in to his arm  I love you Zoe 

Zoe resting her head on his chest  I love you too Max 

to be continued

10 days later

Two guards at the demon village jail walk over to Rex's cell

Guard 1 open the cell door  Your free to go kid 

Rex got off of the floor and walk to the door

Guard 2 removed his handcuffed  Now git off of here 

Rex walk out of the jail door sad Why do them let me live,I left my best friend for death, And I didn't even care ,tell I saw him again,They shod have killed me

Rex sady made his way to the demonkage tower ware Max and Zoe ( and Zoe waering a pink kimono) had gist returned from ther date hand in hand

Rex stop and turned around The both of them will never forgive me

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As soon as Max and Zoe got to the tower one of Max's new mothers guards appeared infront of them

The demon ninja guard  Max and Zoe lady demonkage wishes to speak the two of you  and whit that the demon disappeared

Max pick Zoe up in his arms jumped from building to building and finally in his mothers ( i'm not puting new infront of mother for now on ) office window

Max puting Zoe down  Mother you to talk to us 

Yuki  Yes you see the hidden sound ( and Orochimaru is death )village has attacked and destroy all of the other ninja villages 

Max shock to learn that the hidden demon and hidden sound are the last two ninja villages

Zoe  what the hidden sound village 

Max tells Zoe what the hidden sound village is

Zoe  That's horrible 

Max pulled her in to his arms

Max  Mother were they any survivors 

Yuki  Yes but 500 orphans,they will arrive that the village gates soon,and on an unrelated notce Your exfriend Rex was release from jail today and wasn't arrive at the tower yet,you beast find him before he gits himself killed 

Max  Yes mother,Zoe stay here I'm going to look for Rex 

Max jumpout of the window and on to the street

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Rex sady walking down the streets of the hidden demon village I shod be death

Rex over hares two girl demon talking

Girl demon 1  Did you hares the hidden sound village destroy all the other ninja villages 

Girl demon 2  I did and the only survivors are a group of 500 orphans form the leaf, rain, sand, wave, and snow villages 

Girl demon 1  Will and lest they will be adopted by new loving families in the hidden demon village 

Rex those poor kids

?  Rex 

Rex turned to see Max

?=Max  Rex you were so post to come straight to the demonkage tower one you got out of jail 

Rex sad  I can show my face there you and Zoe will never forgive me 

Max Forgiveness is same thing you have to work for Rex 

Rex  your right  as he ran back to the demonkage tower

Max turned around to see the orphans form the now destroy villages arrive, and a group of 6 year oldies picking on a 4 year old boy

Max walking to the group of 6 year olds  I would stop that if I was you 

the 6 year oldies ran

Max walked over to the 4 year old boy dress in blue jeans and a black shirt

Max  Are you ok Kid 

the 4 year old  No I never had a family and I never will 

Max  I know how you feel my mom and dad were killed right in front of the eyes, but I was adopted by the demonkage and She love me gist as much as my old one,that why I'm a demon now 

the 4 year old '' really ? ''

Max  yes 

the 4 year old smiled

Max  My name is Max and yours 

the 4 year old  konohamaru ( he is not the same konohamaru from naruto ) 

Max see konohamaru blood drip form his arm  Come whit me my mom's a healer 

Max pick up konohamaru and in no time they arrived at the demonkage tower at the same time Rex did

Max holding on to konohamaru he jumped from building to building and thin right throw his mother's office window

Max put konohemaru down  mother this boy is blooding 

Yuki walk over to the boy  Let me see your arm 

Konohamaru hold out his arm

Yuki put her hand over the cut on his arm and her hand stared to glow red and the cut healed

Yuki  son take Zoe to your room I would like to talk the boy alone 

Max taking Zoe's hand in his  Yes mother  and the two lovers left the room

Yuki  tell me your name boy 

Konohamaru  It's konohamaru 

Yuki  Will konohamaru would it be ok if I adopted you 

Konohamaru  I would like that 

Yuki smiling as she made hand sign and the same thing that happened to Max happened to konohamaru but unlike Max the only thing different about konohamaru is he as a fox tail and fox his clothes are the same

Yuki  Now son I'm show you to your room

Konohamaru  thank mom 

Yuki similing as She and Max's new little brother walk out the room and caught up to Max and Zoe

Yuki  hold on son 

Max and Zoe stop and turned to see Yuki and a 4 year old half fox demon next her

Max  will it look like mother adopted you Konohamaru, So l guess I'm your big brother now 

Zoe  hi I'm Zoe your new big brother's girlfriend 

Konohamaru  Hi I'm konohamaru 

Yuki smiling  come along Konohamaru you need your sleep, you will have plenty of time to git to know your big brother in the morning 

konohamaru  ok mom  as he fallowed his new mom to his new room

Max opened the door to his room and pulled Zoe in,throw her on the bed and got on top of her

Zoe blushing blood red  Max show same self-control 

Max kissed her lips the kiss was long and loving

Max broke the kiss  Zoe do think I would make love to you whit the Alph gang, Rex,and my new littel brother around , I gistlike to make you blush  as he pulled her closer

Zoe blushing more as she rested her head on this chest  I love Max 

Max kissed her on the forehead  I love too Zoe 

and soon Zoe was asleep in his arms

Max at the rate my family's growing it may not be long before I'm dad as he wint to sleep

to be continued

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