Star wars:unknown worlds(actual fanfic)

CHAPTER 1: plans and dreams
The eclipse was hovering ominously over the wildspace world of ferryia VI.

An imperial grand moff named Alcsan aproached the ressurected emperor.

Grand Moff Alcsan: Sir...

The Emperor: What? The emperor said annoyed.

Grand Moff Alcsan: We have ressurected Darth Malak.

The Emperor: Excellent commander! Prepare to land your troops!

The Emperor: He will be a large improvement over that treachorus Vader.

Grand Moff Alcsan: Yes sir.

Chomper was having a nightmare.

Chomper: Whats going on? where am I? Chomper asked panicked.

He looked in horror as a giant thing hovered in the sky and seemingly dropped fire onto the valley.

It was ravaging both the great valley and the mysterious beyond.

Chomper: NOOOOOOOOOOO!

Chomper awoke. He was panicked at the horrors he saw. Strange things hovered in mid air and burned the valley to the ground.

He then fell back to sleep an hour later. Only to be visited by another nightmare. This one showed him running through a ravine. As he ran he got chased by Redclaw.

Chomper: Help! Somebody help!

Just when he thought Redclaw would catch him. He saw this strange green stick, it cleaved through Redclaws back. The surprised sharptooth retreated.

He then saw a strange figure who was holding the strange thing. He was about to say thanks when he dissapeared. He immediatley woke up. He was compelled to go into the mysterious beyond.

CHAPTER 2: Awakening and the journey
Jake slowley woke up.

Jake: Where am I?

He was in the orphanage with the other children and then an earthquake occured. He was knocked out cold.

The 12 and a half year old looked around. He saw a structure that appeared to be the interior of the ebon hawk.

Jake: Sweet! He thought out loud.

He then spied two droids in the corner: he recognised them as HK-47 from star wars: KOTOR. The other was an R-series astromech droid.

Jake:Cool!

He reactivated the Astromech first, Just to be safe. The droid then identified him as master and started repairing the hawk's hull.

Jake: My very on artoo unit.

He then took the rifle from HK-47's hands and turned him on.

HK-47: Greetings master.

Jake: Huh?

HK-47: As you were the meatbag who reproggamed me. You are my new master.

Jake: So you won't hurt me?

HK-47: Of course not master Jake. It is against my programming to kill my master...

HK cotinued after hesitating.

HK-47: As long os you don't misuse me.

HK-47: The little astromech is designated as R4-X2. If he is annoying you master, I could kill the little trash compactor!

Jake: No, I actually like him.

Jake thought to himself, my very own droids.

HK-47: Master, my sensors indicate that you have a high degree of force sensitivity.

Jake: What?!

HK-47: I told you master, you have a midiclorian count as high as a jedi.

Jake: So I could be a jedi?

HK-47: Precisley. But you would need training to be one.

Jake:Does the communications array work?

HK-47: I regret that it does not master! But we do have the necesary suplies to build a lightsaber.

HK-47: I suggest that you begin working on it immediatley.

Jake: OK.

meanwhile...

Chomper was walking though a dark forest. He was beggining to think that this was not a good idea.

Just then, he heard a stick brake. Chomper started to panic, but was relieved to know that it was only Littlefoot.

Chomper: Hi Littlefoot.

Littlefoot: What are you doing out here all alone?

Chomper: Well, it was a sleepstory I had.

Chomper told Littlefoot everything, including the horrors of the things attacking the valley. He knew he could trust Littlefoot.

Littlefoot: Thats horrible! If your going to look for this figure then I'm coming to!

Chomper at first was going to just tell Littlefoot that it would be to dangerous. But Littlefoot reminded him that he was still to young to be on his own. Chomper then finally accepted it.

Chomper: Alright. Lets go!

Littlefoot: OK.

The two then eventually came to a fork in the trail. One way was smooth but seemed more frightening, the other

was rougher but less dense.

Chomper: Which way do we go?

At that moment, Redclaw jumped out of the rougher path.

Littlefoot: I guess that answers that question. RUN!

The pair was chased by Redclaw all over the forest. Until they both crashed into something hard. It had a domed head and was startled by them. They looked forward, Thud and Screech were where the domed headed creature came from. They were trapped. ]

Littlefoot: Oh no!

Just when they were about to get eaten, A Light was shot at the sharptooth and he whipped his tail to knock two more people.

HK-47: Blast these indigenous carnivores.

When it seemed they were about to get swallowed. A green stick flew into Redclaw's head. It slashed the top and left a nasty gash. They all looked up to see a hooded figure that then somehow pushed the sharpteeth away. He landed. He then removed his hood.

?: I am luke skywalker. Here to save you.

CHAPTER 3: LUKE SKYWALKER!
Jake was amazed to meet his boyhood idol. He never imagined it, let alone ever think he would do it.

Jake: My name is Jake Allenswell! Pleased to meet you Master Skywalker.

Luke: I sense you have a strong degree of force. You should begin training.

Jake: So I'M really going to be a jedi? Sweet!

Chomper then finally picked up the courage to say something.

Chomper: Um, Hi.

Everyone(exclunding Littlefoot): HUH?1

HK-47: The little meatbags can talk!

Littlefoot: Oh we didn't mean to scare you.

Jake: It's okay, where I come from dinosaurs don't talk.

HK-47: It is no use talking to the little meatbags. May I just silence them now master?

Luke gave HK a dissaproving stare.

Jake: no. They could lead us to shelter.

Chomper: You can come to our valley, no sharpteeth can get in because of the mountains.

Luke: Okay, Might as well observe the locals. As I am stranded.

Jake: Lead the way!

Chomper: My name is Chomper by the way.

Littlefoot: My name is littlefoot!

Jake: Nice to meet you, I'm Jake, This is HK-47 AND R4-X2, And this is Luke.

Jake: Let me just get supplies.

After getting supplies, The seven then traveled to the great valley.

CHAPTER 4: THE VALLEY
When they got to the valley. Luke saw that Jake had a concealed and incomplete lightsaber on his belt.

Luke: I see you have a lightsaber already.

Jake: Its incomplete.

Luke: I can help you complete it.

Jake: Thanks!

?: Littlefoot, Chomper where are you?

Littlefoot: That's my grandpa, I'll explain to him about you. They'll get you settled in.

About a half hour later, Littlefoot returned with his grandparents.

Littlefoot: Grandpa, Grandma, these are my friends: Jake,Luke, HK-47, and R4-X2.

The humans and droids explained to the dinosaurs what they were doing here and the basics of both universes.

After a bit of explaining, Grandpa and Grandma allowed them to sleep in the caverns where Chomper and Ruby slept.

Chomper: Cool they get to sleep with us!

Littlefoot and Chomper headed off to play.

Jake: Hey Luke, I might need you to help me explain to his friends about this, you wanna come?

Luke: Why not?

HK-47: Master, me and the astromech we'll escort you.

Jake: Alright.

When they got there. Littlefoot's and Chomper's friends looked like They brought freaks home.

Littlefoot: Hi guys, this Jake and Luke. We met them last night. They were lost.

They noticed that one of the two humans looked considerably older.

Jake: We are just here because we got stranded.

Littlefoot and Chomper explained to them how that Luke saved them from Redclaw.

Chomper: Show them your lightsaber!

Luke grinned and activated it's green blade.

The children's suspicions changed to admiration as they saw the glowing blade.

They all started to introduce themselves. Cera was the triceratops, Ducky was the parasaurolophus, Petrie was the pteranodon,Spike was introduced by Ducky because he could not talk yet, Ruby was the oviraptor.

Petrie: What it do?

Luke then tossed up a rock and sliced through it in a clean cut.

Ducky: cool. I like it, yep, yep, yep.

Ruby: It is very pretty isn't it.

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