The road less traveled: the story of William John smith

this is my first narrative and first story on this wikia I would love some feedback on it and remember this story is not over until says the end

PROLOGUE

an ambulance wails as it hurtles down the street. A body is wheeled out on a stretcher, a man is being forced to the back of a police car and a solitary young teenage boy stands to the side watching everything around him.